Where Do We Go From Here? The Hero's Journey, Part 1

Cranky Rah loves to get out of her cave if it means going on a journey. The Great Ocean Road in Australia, the tiny walled town of Rothenburg, Germany. The Rocky Mountains, the Okefenokee Swamp. The Highlands of Scotland, of course.

Maybe this is why I dig the Hero's Journey so much—and why, as The Three know, I can go on about it. When I do go on about something with The Three, I usually ply them with cocoa and treats (okay, they bring the treats; I just give them excuse to bake something chocolate). Since it appears I can't deliver cocoa through cyberspace (is that why there's chocolate on the floor under my desk, or was that just the Poet-Accountant eating ice cream at 6 a.m. again?), I'll break this into three posts. Today, we'll just tackle the question What the heck is this thing, the Hero's Journey?

You can read entire books about the Hero's Journey (I particularly like The Writer's Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers by Christopher Vogler), but I broke it down a little for The Three. I also focused on the first half of the journey for them because the first thing The Three told me when we started getting together was that while they love making up characters and developing backstory, it's the plot that snags them—figuring out how to make the ideas they have happen in a way that makes sense, figuring out where those characters are going to go.

First, the backstory of the Hero's Journey: The mythologist Joseph Campbell studied myths from around the world and believed that the reason certain stories are repeated over and over in vastly different cultures is because they deal with universal questions: Who am I? Where did I come from? What is good and evil, and what should I do about it?

Not Godzilla,
but copyright free!

Most stories are, in essence, about a search: a girl searches for love or freedom or herself; a boy searches for the mother who abandoned him or to make a name for himself or to discover the antidote to a poison; a detective searches for a murderer; Japanese citizenry search for a way to escape Godzilla. This search is what we call the Hero's Journey, and you'll find it in The Odyssey, Shakespeare, Cinder, Agatha Christie, Shrek and The Hunger Games. Some books and movies are obvious journeys, like Star Wars, The Lightning Thief and The Lord of the Rings. Others don't involve a physical journey but are Hero's Journeys nonetheless, like Iron Man, Pride and Prejudice and Divergent. All very different stories, but all with similar characteristics.

Here's the Hero's Journey in a nutshell: A hero starts out in her ordinary world but soon ventures (or is dragged) into an unfamiliar world where she must accomplish a task. She encounters challenges and tests, and she confronts a villain or villains. In the end, she either succeeds at her task or doesn't, but she's grown, her outlook on the world has changed and life will never be the same again.

Don't be turned off by the words hero and villain. By hero, we mean the main character; the person the story's about; the person who has the most at stake and who will change the most by the end. There are lots of different types of heroes, including dark, troubled anti-heroes who are their own worst enemy and heroes who aren't particularly heroic. And by villain, we mean the character who's getting in the main character's face in some way; a villains doesn't always need to mean the main character harm.

Also, don't be turned off if you think this all sounds a lot like an adventure story. It's true that the Hero's Journey is easy to see in quests like Star Wars and The Wizard of Oz. If you read about the Hero's Journey a lot, you'll come across words like supernatural and fabulous forces and battle language like victory and power. But the Hero's Journey is just as relevant to stories that don't have a physical or mystical quest. The Hero's Journey is, at its root, a character's inner journey. Writers who are sitting around scratching our heads and wondering what's going to happen next can use the Hero's Journey as a guide for developing a strong plot and memorable characters.

Another kind of caveat,
the ungrammatical kind

Before we get into the ooey-gooey viscera of the Hero's Journey, there's one caveat (there's always a caveat): This is an art, not a science. The steps I'm going to outline are just pieces in a puzzle. Each one can be left out, twisted or put in a different order. It's up to you, after all: You're in charge. (Bwa-ha-ha!)

In the next post, we'll explore plot and how to get your character on her journey.